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[FIC] Innocent? (Ch.1)

  • Mar. 18th, 2008 at 1:43 PM

 Title:  Innocent?
Length: Series
Author: lovelybubbles04
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: YunJae, YooMin, LeeSu (Leeteuk & Junsu. I know, odd paring)
Summary: What happens when an innocent Kim Jaejoong meets the high school's most popular senoir Jung Yunho? When Jaejoong only listens to his 'Mama' which drives Yunho nuts? When Yoochun and Changmin are trying to confess to each other but keep on getting intrupted? When Kim Junsu and Park Leetuek are trying to make everything right between their friends? When Jaejoong's past starts coming back?
Disclaimer: This story is purely my imagination. None of the characters belong to me.



Credits to xmkaex@soompi!



Innocent? Ch.1
Yoochun walked on the white marble floor of his high school, his fingers lightly grazing the wall beside him. There was only one thing on his mind at the moment. Changmin. The only time he could spend time with him was in the morning. He was glad he at least got twenty minutes everyday to spend time with him. It was the only time no one disturbed them.

When Yoochun reached the classroom he leaned against the door, arms crossed across his chest, and gently smiled at the man before him reading 'Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.' 'I wonder when I started falling for his boy-ish charms.' He started thinking. 'When I started smiling at those silly text messages he sends me. When I started getting jealous when he calls other people 'cute.' When I started feeling my heart beating faster and faster when he smiles. When I fell in love with him.'



A few minutes ago.
Tapping his fingers on his desk, Changmin waited for Yoochun to come. 'What's taking him so long?!?!' Changmin thought getting impatient. Yoochun was just making him wait too long. It's not like Changmin came a half an hour early.......ok maybe he did, but it wasn't his fault!! He just couldn't wait to see Yoochun. It's ok Changmin. Just be patient. He thought to himself.



5 seconds later.
"I'll just read 'Harry Potter' then!!" he said adding "at least he doesn't make me wait."
A few minutes later Changmin felt eyes on him. Deciding to just brush it off, he started to read again.

“Together,” he said “the Deathly Hallows.”
“Together,” he said “the Deathly Hallows.”
“Together,” he said “the Deathly Hallows.”
“Together,” he said “the Deathly Hallows.”

"WOULD YOU STOP STARING AT ME; I'VE BEEN READING THE SAME LINE OVER AND OVER AGAIN!!!!!!" Changmin screamed.
"Sorry Min. Didn't know it bothered you.
"Oh....no need to apologize Yoochun; I just hate reading the same line over and over and over again."
The chuckling Yoochun sat down, and started to do what they do everyday. This was........talk talk talk, blush blush blush.




<>.<>.<>.<>.<>.<>.<>.
Dear Mem

My name is Kim Jaejoong and I turned 19 years old in January. I know that Mama got me you a week ago, but I was too busy learning stuff for my new school. I named you Mem because I store my memories in you. Get it! Anyways, it's 6:15am now and school doesn't start till 7:20.
Mama told me that two months ago I lost my memory due to a car accident. The doctor said that I have to be like a normal kid and go to school like a normal kid. So I’ve been learning a lot of stuff since then. Mama said that I have a photographic memory. She also said that I’m gonna have to finish the rest of the three months of 12th grade.
Last week these two people named Junsu and Changmin came over!!! They told me that they were one of my best friends. I have best friends!!! Isn’t that great!! They also told me that they have two other best friends name Yoochun and Yunho. Junsu said “Jaejoong-ah, you know it’s very obvious that Changmin like Yoochun." And then Changmin face went all pink. I didn’t really get what Junsu meant when he said that. Aren’t you supposed to like your friends???
Anyways, today is my first day of school and I’m really nervous!!!! I hope people are nice in high school.
Oh! I think I just heard Junsu downstairs!!! He’s picking me up for school! Bye Mem.

Love,
Jaejoong♥

<>.<>.<>.<>.<>.<>.<>.<>.


Getting out of my car I made my way towards the school entrance.
"Um....oppa?" I heard a voice behind.
*sigh*
Another girl who has a crush on me. Honestly, these girls are so annoying!!
Turning around, I put on my million dollar smile.
"Yes." I said.
"Um....well......."geez! Just say you like me already!! Then I can reject you like I do with all the other girls.
"well....I was wondering......if you would like to go out with me." she finally finished.
"I'm sorry, but I'm not interested in dating anyone right now."
"O......ok." she said and ran off crying to her friend who hid behind a pole. Yes a pole.

*riiiiiiiiiiiing*

The warning bell rang signaling the students to hurry up to class.
I quickly ran to class before any fan girls to start to stalk me. And as expected Yoochun and Changmin were talking; seriously, why don't they just get together?

Students started filling up one by one. Where was Junsu?
“Yah Yoochun where’s Junsu??”
“I don’t know ask Eunhyuk?”
“Eunhyuk’s not in this class you idiot!”
“Well, I don’t know!! Now stop annoying me I’m trying to talk with Changmin here!!”

“Class be quiet and pay attention for a minute!!!!” the whole class shut up so they could listen to the Ms. Song.
“Ok, like I said yesterday we’re going to have a new student today.....Mr. Kim you may bring him in!” so that’s where Junsu was!!!
Junsu was blocking my view so I couldn’t really see how he looked like. What was his name again...Jejo...Jaejoo.....Jaejoong? Yes!!! It’s Jaejoong.
Junsu sat back down after whispering something in Jaejoong’s ear.
“Ok Jaejoong why don’t introduce yourself.” Ms. Song said as if she was talking to a little kid. Jaejoong just looked at her in a ‘Just because I lost me memories doesn’t mean I’m an idiot, idiot’ look.

When he looked back at the class...........MAN, WAS HE HOT!!!!! He was pretty, hot, beautiful, hot, cute, hot, adorable, and hot!! He had milky pale white skin, black raven hair that hugged his neck, big eyes that held two big dark orbs, and to finish it off he had full, pouty, kissable rosy pink lips. His body was really toned. You could tell he had muscles on his stomach. Never in my life have I seen a man so breathe taking.

“Hi everybody! My name is Kim Jaejoong and I turned 19 years old this January. I hope we get along well.” wow. And a beautiful voice as well.

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[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 06:17 pm (UTC)
OM song as in song hyekyo?!!!

omgomgomgomg this is so cute MORE!!
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 07:15 pm (UTC)
lol, thanks for reading~!
'Song hyekyo'? I'm not exactly sure what you mean by that...
Sorry! *embarrased*

-Kikyo♥
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[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 10:32 pm (UTC)
ahh dont worry hehe, i thought when you wrote Ms. Song you were meaning it to be Song Hye Kyo, shes an actress.
haha dw, i jumped to conclusionsss *is embarrassed also*
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:25 am (UTC)
lol, don't worry about that~!
I do that too~! xD
lol, we can be the "embarrassed jumping to comclusion twins" from now on!!! xD

......ok, I'll shut up now. =.='
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[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)
haha that sounds like me xD
aahh~~~ >///
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 08:20 pm (UTC)
lol, we're so alike! xD
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[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 28th, 2008 04:04 pm (UTC)
just like twins XDD
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 28th, 2008 11:11 pm (UTC)
omg I LOOOOOVEEEE your icon!!!!!
Jaejoong looks wicked good!! ^o^
Darn it Jae, why do you have to be so good looking! ><
I think it's about time I change my icon too.
Oh well, I'm too lazy right now! xD
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[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
ahhh i know! its soooooo cute >.<
hes just too good looking~<3
haha it was about ime for me to change my icons so i did xD i had put it off for ages... so lazy >.>
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 02:11 am (UTC)
Oh you changed it again!!
Jaejoong-ah you make me squel!!!!!! ><
Hurray, we're both lazy!! ^o^
xD
sry, I'm seriously hyper now......don't know why though! xD
I was feeling hyper for a while now, but now I think about it, I think it's more of a 'too much YunJae-ness' feeling.
Do you ever get those??
Ok, now I'm just rembeling.
I tend to do that....a lot.
And here I go doing that again.

......ok, I'll shut up now. =.='

-Kikyo♥

P.S: Dude, that last line was so daje vu! xD
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[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 10:33 am (UTC)
it just keeps changing!!! xD

yeah i do get those, def too much yunjae! 8DD

xDDDD I'm totally friending you hun, youre priceless <3

P.S its a jaechun slap!!!
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:17 pm (UTC)
lol, I love this icon too~!

JJ: Chunnie, move or else! *dun dun duuunnnn* XD
on crack again! xD
lol, have you ever seen the commercial where they go:
"blah blah blah blah $2, 800. Blah blah blah $1,000. Blah blah blah, priceless." ??
I what I thought when you said I was priceless.
Hey, from now on we can be the "embarrassed jumping to comclusion priceless twins" xD
----
Are you my Unnni twin, dongseng twin, or twin twin??
I'm 13.
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[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:32 pm (UTC)
xD crack is great <3
no i havn't xDDD dont get embarrassed though ok?

Unni twin! I'm 15 n________n
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
ahhhh you changed it again~!!!!!! ^o^
I love how his cheeks puffed up a little!!!!!
He looks sooo cute~!!!!!!!!!!!! ><
Ok Unni twin! XD
haha, your my Unni twin!
lol, that makes no sense....I love it! xD
Finally I have an Unni!! ^o^
I have an older sis but she doesn't count! xD
I'm more like her Unnie at times!! x]
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[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 02:36 pm (UTC)
yup haha <3 he's too cute

yay for having an unni xD
*huggles*
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 08:26 pm (UTC)
no wonder Yunnie feel for him! x]
Yay for having a dongseng! xD
*hugs back*
lol, I just read our whole entire conversation, and wow the whole thing's on crack! xD
from the embarrassed twins, all the way to the Unni twin.
Like you said "xD crack is great <3"
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[info]moon1084 wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 06:46 pm (UTC)
ahhhh is that yunho pov at the end! hehehehe!
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 07:16 pm (UTC)
Yes, it's Yunnie's pov at the end! ^^
Thanks for reading~! ^O^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]minlovesfood wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 07:19 pm (UTC)
"MAN, WAS HE HOT!!!!! He was pretty, hot, beautiful, hot, cute, hot, adorable, and hot!!"

lol, you forgot sexy! x]
This fic is so far so cute!! xD
Update soon! ^^
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:26 am (UTC)
lol, I knew I forgot something! xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]asuka2507 wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 09:59 pm (UTC)
i was waiting for this fic... i guess uve been busy... but its ok... at least ive got a chance to read this updates... i cant wait for joongie to annoy yunnie... that would be uber superb... haha.. thanks for the updates...
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:28 am (UTC)
actually, I've wasn't really sure if I should continue this fic in Detox, but then I thought "oh I'll just give it a shot!" ^^
Thx for reading~! ^o^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]detskie wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 09:59 pm (UTC)
hahaha...yunho had fallen in love at first sight...this is getting interesting now...please write more...will be waiting for the next!!!

thanks for sharing <333
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
lol, yes he has!
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]jaeholife wrote:
Mar. 18th, 2008 10:03 pm (UTC)
yay !!! jaejoongs first day in school
and yuho is already attracted...
this so nice
thanks
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]0m0 wrote:
Mar. 19th, 2008 07:15 am (UTC)
i remember reading this at winglin.
i like it so much that i favourited it.
but then u stopped updating.
i'm glad u decided to post it here. =D
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:30 am (UTC)
lol, actually I just needed inspiration~! ^^
But winglin is ahead in this fic, for now! ^^
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]irerd_taga wrote:
Mar. 19th, 2008 10:05 am (UTC)
Yunho's smitten with Jae already! Wonder if he'll blatantly go after Jae or use subtle moves?
Yoomin's so cute together!
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:31 am (UTC)
Oh....by the time Yunho and Jaejoong get together, Yunho will go NUTS! xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]karminetokiogal wrote:
Mar. 19th, 2008 11:32 am (UTC)
I love this fanfic so far! Can't wait until the update! ^_^
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:31 am (UTC)
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]nd261993 wrote:
Mar. 19th, 2008 12:10 pm (UTC)
I'm in Luv with ur Fic !!!
^_^
^_^
Jae is sooo Cute...
Pls write more...
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
Oh, I plan to write more! xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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[info]chloe1910 wrote:
Mar. 20th, 2008 01:43 pm (UTC)
LOL! And our heartrobe has fallen badly for the new kid on the block.....

Please update soon..
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[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 27th, 2008 01:32 am (UTC)
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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