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Innocent? (Ch. 2 [prt. 2 of 2])

  • Mar. 29th, 2008 at 12:10 PM

Title:  Innocent?
Length: Series
Author: lovelybubbles04
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: YunJae, YooMin, LeeSu (Leeteuk & Junsu. I know, odd paring)
Summary: What happens when an innocent Kim Jaejoong meets the high school's most popular senoir Jung Yunho? When Jaejoong only listens to his 'Mama' which drives Yunho nuts? When Yoochun and Changmin are trying to confess to each other but keep on getting intrupted? When Kim Junsu and Park Leetuek are trying to make everything right between their friends? When Jaejoong's past starts coming back?
Disclaimer: This story is purely my imagination. None of the characters belong to me.


Prolouge
Chapter 1

Chapter 2 (prt, 1 of 2)


Credits to xmkaex@soompi!


Innocent? Ch.2 (prt.2 of 2)


mmmm.....where am I? Everything looked blurry to me the minute I woke up. Sitting up staright I rubbed my eye and looked up only to find an extremely sad, pouting, nevertheless an adorable Kim Jaejoong sitting at the foot of my bed. What's he doing here?

HOLY SHIZZLES!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE I JUST EMBARRASSED MYSELF IN FRONT OF A HOT, SE.XY, GORGEOUS, HANDSOME, HEAVENLY GOD!!!!!!!!

"I'm sorry." I heard a tiny voice squeak out. I looked up at a teary eyed Jaejoong and asked why he was sorry. You want to the know reply I got?
You sure?
Are you really?
Positive?
Absolutly positively sure?
Well, here it is....
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"You fainted because of my ugliness didn't you?"
"......" yes, that my friends was his answer. =_=''
"I knew it!!! You did!!!!!" all of the sudden he burst out crying so loud your eardrums could've broke!!

HOLY SHIZZLES!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE I JUST MADE A HOT, SE.XY, GORGEOUS, HANDSOME, HEAVENLY GOD CRY!!!!!!!!

I started panicing and trying to do the best I could to clam him down!!

"It's ok~~~ Don't cry. Who said you're not pretty,"

"WAHHHHH!!!! I'M NOT A GIRL~~~~ MAMA WAS RIGHT! YOU'RE ONE OF THOSE MEAN BULLIES!!!!!" He said crying even louder this time.

"I'm not a bully!!! I swear!!"

"LIAR!!!"

Great. Just great! I just made a hot, se.xy, gorgeous, handsome, heavenly god think I'm a bully!!!!

I looked around the room to see if there was anything to clam him down.
Pillows? Nah!
Pencils? Nah!
Paper? Nah!
Candy? Nah!
Wat-

CANDY!!! THANK GOD!!!!!!! --god technically was Jaejoong ^^
I grabbed a bunch of hard candy and offered them to him.

"Do you want some candy?" I asked nervously. He has to accept candy! I mean for pete's sake who doesn't like candy!

He stopped crying for a minute, looked straight at me, and took the candy from my hand.
*sigh* Finally he stopped crying.
"I DON'T LIKE SWEET THINGS!!!!!!!"
This made me look up at him. I saw him looking at the candy, picking one them up and chuck it at my head!

"OW~! WHAT WAS THAT FOR!!!" I asked angrily. Hey, don't get me wrong here!! Just because I think he's a hot, se.xy, gorgeous, handsome, heavenly god doesn't mean I can get angry at this hot, se.xy, gorgeous, handsome, heavenly god.

The minute I yelled at him, his eyes watered up, and his pouty lips quivered. Oh boy. Here come the water works.

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"Yah Junsu hyung? Is it just me or do you hear someone crying?"
"It's not just you Changmin. By any chance do you mean someone that sounds a whole lot like Jaejoong?"
"Ya that someone.......you don't think Yunho hyung...."
"And then called him....."
"And after that offer him......"
"I think he did."
*sigh* "Let's go clam hyung down." sleep.gif
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Jaejoong sat in front of me sniffing while I was currently wiping away the tears of a hot, se- you get the point.
How you ask.
Well, all I had to do was promise him that I won't hurt him while I wiped his tears away.
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.......and jumped up and down (like a chimpanzee would) saying "cross my heart and hope to die..."

Well, at least I get wipe away his tears. Pssh! It's not like I can hurt him this way.

*POKE*

"MY EYE!!!!!!!! YOU POKED MY EYE!!!!!!!!!!! YOU LIAR!!!!!!!! YOU EVIL!!!!! EVIL I TELL YOU!!!!!! EEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"


Oh boy. I just met this hot, se.xy, gorgeous, handsome, heavenly god of a creature and I'm already half way into h.ell. =_=''
 



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TBC
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A/N: Hi everybody~! ^^
        I'm sorry I couldn't reply to all of your comments!
        I did read them though, and I thank you so so much for commenting! ^o^

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[info]haengbokyunho wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 04:45 pm (UTC)
OMG JAEJOONG XD He's such a crybaby, poor Yunho. But yeah who doesn't like candy... Totally abnormal.

This is funny and sweet so far, thanks for sharing! <3
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:48 am (UTC)
....actually, I'm not much of a candy eater! xD
lol, thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]honey_vaniity wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 04:47 pm (UTC)
xD; What the hell?

Hehe, this was way awesome though. *gives cookie* Poor Jae, he's so cute.
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:49 am (UTC)
lol, I love your reaction! xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]moon1084 wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 05:01 pm (UTC)
meeee? hahahaha yunho is gonna be on one long ride to hell

Edited at 2008-03-29 05:06 pm (UTC)
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:49 am (UTC)
Oh yes he is! xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]jaeholife wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 05:30 pm (UTC)
jae is such a crying baby.....and cute..
loved it
thanks
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:50 am (UTC)
No matter what our JJ does, it's adorable~! ^o^
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]emeraud_hero wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 06:02 pm (UTC)
bwahahha! o, that is funny!!
jaejoong is soo cute and adorable, but he doe need to grow up a little bit more here.
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:51 am (UTC)
Hiiii, it's you! xD
lol, yes he does~
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]irerd_taga wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 06:07 pm (UTC)
Jae's so childish and Yunho's already smitten by him, judging by his mushy inner thoughts!
Can't wait to read more...
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:52 am (UTC)
haha, YunJae are always meant to be~! ^^♥
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]chloe1910 wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 06:32 pm (UTC)
hahahaha..this fic is still as cute as ever!!!
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:52 am (UTC)
I'm glad you think it's cute~! ^o^
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]rhegene wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 06:43 pm (UTC)
LOL jae joong is so cute......
I want to hug him.....
hehehehehe!...
update soon neh?...
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:54 am (UTC)
I want to hug him too~! ^o^
But sadly, I can't! TT_TT
Even if I did have a chance to meet him, and I hugged him, Yun will kill me. =.=''
.....and the fangirls! xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]asuka2507 wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 10:31 pm (UTC)
sigh~ OH MY~ hahah...joongie's answer is worth to kill myself... lol... and OMG yunnie fainted... haha... and so yunnie would be handling a really hard person then... uwaaaaa~ cant wait for next chapter... *giggles* hope it wont be that long.... hwaiting ne~
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:55 am (UTC)
I'm glad you're enjoying this~! ^o^
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]minlovesfood wrote:
Mar. 29th, 2008 11:11 pm (UTC)
lol, I don't think JJ got enough sleep the night before! xD
omo omo I love the MinSu conversation!!
Update soon! ^________^ <333
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:55 am (UTC)
I don't think he did either! xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]hosu_luvr_1592 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:53 am (UTC)
I really like this story can't wait for the next chapter. post soon.
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:56 am (UTC)
I try 'n update asap! ^____^
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]hosu_luvr_1592 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 02:09 am (UTC)
I love reading other peoples works because i think they are so much better then mine.

Yay!
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 02:14 am (UTC)
awwwww, I'm sure you write well!
Well....I haven't read any of your works so far...
Ok, I'm gonna go and read one of 'em! ^o^

-Kikyo♥

P.S: I've never read any HoSu fics before, are they good?
[info]hosu_luvr_1592 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 02:59 am (UTC)
yes i love hosu. Just to let you know i have Taking over me that is my fic i am currently working on now.
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:22 pm (UTC)
ooo I see I see. *nods head up and down*
[info]kattan69 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:56 am (UTC)
Jae really behaves like a crybaby. How will Yunho handle him..so innocent. It looks like Yunho got his work cut trying to get Jae to like him....a lot of work and time.

Anyway, pls update soon.
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:58 am (UTC)
lol, for some reason, this chapter was supposed to have some fluffy YunJae action but it turned into a pm-sy JJ!! xD
hahaha, yes Yun got a good work out! xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]yuzuk1 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 05:00 am (UTC)
yunho worshipped jae....
>_>
jae is so cute here....well, he's always cute...
i wish yunho good luck xD~
update soon!
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:24 pm (UTC)
lol, I can just imagin Yunho going "All hail to Joongie, all hail to Joongie" xD
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]jaejoong_n_n wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:08 pm (UTC)
cute~~ jae just being so childish and cute here
next?
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 01:24 pm (UTC)
oooo I looove your icon~!!!
JJ your so adorable~! ^o^
Thx for reading~! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]detskie wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 08:54 pm (UTC)
all throughout the past chapters i was like grinning so wide reading...and this one really made me laugh so hard with jae acting really like a 5 year old and yunho who doesn't know how to interact with such child who he thinks is one heavenly god of a creature..LOL!!!

"You fainted bcoz of my ugliness" line from jae was kinda funny considering he was the exact opposite!!!!

thanks for sharing <333
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
lol, I'm really happy to know that you enjoy it!! ^^
If my readers are happy, I'm happy! ^o^
Thx for reading, and I'll be sure to update soon!! ^^

-Kikyo♥
[info]perfections wrote:
Mar. 30th, 2008 09:45 pm (UTC)
omygosh its soooooo cute and funny and i love it
MOREEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEE

<333 jaejoong is such a babbyyy and i love ittt <3333


*eats you*

TWIN!
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
lol, JJ is Yunnie's baby! xP
TWIN! ^o^
I actually already had chapter three out a long time ago...
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Dongseng is sorry I didnt reply sooner! ><
Too many exams in school~ @_@
But guess what?!
I got recomended for honors history, I took the test and now I have to wait for the results.
Hope I get in!! ><
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OMG GUESS WHAT?!?!?!?!
You know JJ?
Yes, JJ as in our JJ!
Do you know that he has a new solo out?
It doesn't have a video to it yet, but it's AWWWWWEEEEEEEESSSSSOOOOOMMMMEEEEEEEE!!!
Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ZGYo9nkvjo

-Your lovely dongseng,
Kikyo! ^o^♥
[info]dondonbon wrote:
Mar. 31st, 2008 12:10 am (UTC)
HAHAHAHA
i literally LOL at yunho poking jae's eye
LMFAO
[info]lovelybubbles04 wrote:
Apr. 4th, 2008 11:37 pm (UTC)
lol, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this!! ^^

-Kikyo♥
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